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in a world
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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a perfect world would not be like this
i'd never feel this low
no one would ever leave, there'd be no one to miss
in a world with so much hate
living in a world i live to hate
and lately i've been so tired
(insomnia)
i just want to sleep. ......
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2003-01-30 22:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: in a world
(User Rating: 1 ) by thorns on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 02:57:52 PM AEST (User
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emotional, effective. |
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Re: in a world
(User Rating: 1 ) by kolbrun on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 03:59:17 PM AEST (User
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i think this poem is really unique.... but still verry good. :)
yours Kolbrún |
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