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Roses Only Last For So Long
Contributed by
MyNameIsJonas
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Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 07:34:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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The rose from the past, now withered to black
It beckons me to come see its sharp tack
Which is no longer there; lodged in my heart
Because you had cast it off like a dart
It plans to stay there forever until
The pain becomes too much that it can kill
For every time my heart starts to beat
There is something wrong; I am incomplete
Someone, something seems to be forgotten
It's because this friendship has turned rotten
The least I can do is not let that go
Now the last thing left is to let you know
I'm not angry; I sympathize with you
For all that happened and what you went through
Copyright ©
MyNameIsJonas
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2006-03-18 19:34:52]
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Re: Roses Only Last For So Long
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by moses on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 07:46:28 PM AEST
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Written extremely well. So strong, great imagery. Lots of emotion.
Keep it up,
moses |
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Re: Roses Only Last For So Long
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by Mild_Tempest on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 07:53:20 PM AEST
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| Whenever a lot of people imagine roses, they always imagine an eternal love, which doesn't fade. Your poem though, is the opposite and lets us realize not all love is eternal. Great write. |
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Re: Roses Only Last For So Long
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by slogan on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 08:20:25 PM AEST
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| great write...jh |
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Re: Roses Only Last For So Long
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by inoc on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 06:07:29 AM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this ....yes some love does die out...but your write was well worth the read!
cheers
coni |
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Re: Roses Only Last For So Long
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 07:33:21 AM AEST
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Excellent write....the last couplet sealed it for me.....
Jenni |
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Re: Roses Only Last For So Long
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by brew on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 06:02:53 PM AEST
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Roses are a symbolism of love.yet, I do agree with they do not always last eternally. They can last and last, and then one day,,,,,,they all fall.! Fade and lose their whole. Good compairason....
Brew~ |
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Re: Roses Only Last For So Long
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by chaos78 on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 11:55:31 AM AEST
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| good read,good write |
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