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One
Contributed by
flipped_out
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Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 12:02:25 PM in AEST
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I recoil at the product of my mishaped sanity that sprawls into a fluorecent shield of diaphenous light that makes my soul despondent and weep in untimely flight
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Re: One
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 12:05:24 PM AEST
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Your word usage and sentence structure in this piece leaves me speechless you take poetry writing to a higher level with these words.
I can so identify with this, i am just awestruck.
J |
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Re: One
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by thesinner on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 03:42:38 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. |
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Re: One
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by stew777 on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 04:14:28 PM AEST
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| Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww |
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Re: One
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 06:26:24 PM AEST
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Kel, That one line was enough for me as well.
Sort of like haiku where so few words are used but the meaning is boundless. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: One
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by slogan on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 10:34:29 PM AEST
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| great piece of poetry...jh |
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Re: One
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 01:04:08 AM AEST
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There's a saying that "A Line of words moves the world" and I really do think that's true.
I like this, maybe more than I'm really letting on *Shrugs*
Hope all is well K.
J xoxo |
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