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Never-ending Search
Contributed by
Astralbermudian
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Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 05:55:07 AM in AEST
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Never-ending Search
I wrote this trying to symbolise the need for me to lose this depression before I indeed rot away…
Diving into the utter silence of my head,
Swimming through memories, I tried to forget,
I've searched and searched for a time that I wasn't dead,
A time that I was alive and without any regret.
Breathe in…
I filter through my childhood searching for the prize,
Of when I was with someone that I had respected,
All the roads I travelled down all lead to false happiness and lies,
All of the memories that went by me showed me being rejected.
Release…
I wake up from my meditation again with no finds,
Maybe I will find it tomorrow maybe, maybe not,
Anyway, it's about time to go to where the sun shines,
And get out of the shadows before I rot.
-Jason
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Astralbermudian
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Re: Never-ending Search
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by thesinner on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 07:27:18 AM AEST
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| I can relate. It's an ongoing battle for some of us. You expressed yourself well here.I hope you find the happiness you seek. Well done. |
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Re: Never-ending Search
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by stew777 on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 07:32:43 AM AEST
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Keep searching & writing down your thoughts
Great write and thoughtful words.
I have been where you are now and have
been able to move on It takes Time .
Look forward not back if you can..
God Bless and Good Luck.. |
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Re: Never-ending Search
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by chaos78 on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 08:36:31 AM AEST
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i know how you feel but hopefully in time you can heal for some of us are still waiting
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Re: Never-ending Search
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 08:51:01 AM AEST
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| a poem I can relate to, well done |
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Re: Never-ending Search
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 05:40:09 PM AEST
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| This poem speaks to me. You did a great job in writing these emotions on paper! |
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Re: Never-ending Search
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by brew on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 09:20:34 AM AEST
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You will find, and we all do lots of soul seraching, one time, or another.! Keep going, keep searching, yet...Dont let it get out of context.! Loved the post.
Brew~ |
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Re: Never-ending Search
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by ludders on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 01:51:11 PM AEST
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| ha ha, hey jason you rock, no seriously good poem but if you want to get better try reading some o mine (ludders) nah just playing, seriously its a really good poem in which th central message has come across well |
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Re: Never-ending Search
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 10:34:54 PM AEST
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Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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