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And Now I Remember
Contributed by
Alison
on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 12:23:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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And now my dear,
My very first love,
And now I remember,
All that I tried so hard to forget.
The plans that we made,
The time that we had,
The love that I gave,
And happy days and sad,
Now, and now I remember,
But with no hate or regret,
I live day to day,
Wishing by my side you had stayed.
I was so young,
But I wonder what you would think of me now,
How much I have changed since then.
Now I remember.
We kissed in the night,
By the river so bright.
Holding hands in the darkness,
Brought us only light,
Sitting outside sipping coffee,
And drinking in each others souls.
Meeting at “our usual spot.”
Now I remember,
That which I had longed to forget.
But I have loved and lost since then,
So now I can remember and rejoice,
Filled with thankfulness to you,
And love, so much love, now and forever,
I remember.
Copyright ©
Alison
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2006-03-18 00:23:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: And Now I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by Petznick on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 02:23:40 AM AEST (User
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i like this, switching the rhyme scheme up throughout makes it that much more interesting, thanks for sharing.
lates
Jason Petznick |
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Re: And Now I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 08:33:48 AM AEST (User
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This is interesting.....I enjoyed it....
You have come a long way.
Jenni |
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Re: And Now I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by chaos78 on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 08:51:36 AM AEST (User
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i like this was a good read |
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Re: And Now I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 09:09:53 AM AEST (User
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Great poem, filled with deep thought....Mike |
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Re: And Now I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by whiteleo1984 on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 03:40:02 PM AEST (User
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nice poem i like it
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Re: And Now I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by moses on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 07:33:45 PM AEST (User
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I remember so much, and so many of my poems are about memories. Well written.
Keep it up,
-moses |
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Re: And Now I Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 05:42:28 PM AEST (User
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Wow! This is great! Going through a similar situation myself. |
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