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TIME OF YOUR LIFE
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
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Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 07:31:26 PM in AEST
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Always walking down the line
watching the clock
there's not enough time
you never stop
your always fast
life's a race
you can't be last
but have you ever stoped and ignored the clock?
having the time to take a walk?
if your always running
you'll never see
the future
the present
what you used to be
so stop your worries
go have some fun
turn off that ticking
your race is won.
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2006-03-17 19:31:26]
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Re: TIME OF YOUR LIFE
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 10:28:14 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss.... Lovely write
Jenni |
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Re: TIME OF YOUR LIFE
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 05:19:41 PM AEST
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it is really truthfull.
I really like it.
I'm sorry for your friend.
You know, this will make me think a lot now about my life, I'm a "rushed" person, but now that I read this, I will try to live better. |
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