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Do you sometimes....
Contributed by
bethwood
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Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 05:17:47 PM in AEST
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Do you sometimes sense and feel him?
Like he is stood right at your side
Can you hear his words advising you?
On the worries which you hide.
In dreams, do you still see him?
Loving smile through shinning eyes
Does the sound of his voice still echo?
Sometimes catch you by surprise.
It's because he's all around you
In his arms you're held so tight
He oftens talks to you in whispers
Whenever you can't sleep at night.
You should try and listen closely
Because you maybe just might hear
The gentle hushed sweet nothings
He still whispers in your ears.
Beth Wood
March'06.
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Re: Do you sometimes....
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 05:53:09 PM AEST
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| This is soooo beautiful and comforting, thankyou for posting this piece. |
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Re: Do you sometimes....
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by bethwood on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 06:22:50 PM AEST
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| awww thankyou. thats sort of comment makes it so worthwhile to bring my work out into the open. |
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Re: Do you sometimes....
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by lindy70 on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 06:38:37 PM AEST
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| nice one beth well done love lynn x |
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Re: Do you sometimes....
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by Former_Member on
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| Oooh this one got me. I've lost both my mom and dad, closest and dearest best friend, and a younger brother. They're still whispering in my ear! You tug heart strings with your poetry. Good work! Hey! Shinning should be Shining. |
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Re: Do you sometimes....
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by bethwood on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 11:09:57 AM AEST
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| thankyou. the aim of my poetry is one aim alone. i call it simply pimply! if you get goose pimples then my work is done!! |
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