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What Is Wrong With You?
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 02:18:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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What is wrong with you?
how come you can't realize life?
are you too blind to understand what you're doing?
or do you just not care?
I see the look in your mother's eyes,
the tears that flow like waterfalls
but you don't care!!
You never did!!
all you worry bout is your next bump,
that rush when the poison hits your veins
that poison changed me
do you not think it would change you to?
we were the best of friends
more like brothers of blood
but you let that powder get between us
and now I don't know you anymore
so you think that needle's gonna solve all your problems?
is that what you really think?
you can't even go out in public anymore
cause you know what people think
the look in your eyes shows a sadness that I've never seen
but you can't help it, you continue to do your thing
do you not think it would happen to you?
look at me
I've changed into something I never wanted to be
all because of that stuff that you said what cure all my problems
but it didn't
it made it worse
it made me worse
and now you're following a road that I can't follow
you told me it was just a game
but haven't you figured it out yet?
in this game you can't win
you will only lose
This is life, and guess what?
you missed it
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whiteleo1984
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2006-03-17 14:18:22]
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Re: What Is Wrong With You?
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by Alison on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 02:31:46 PM AEST
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| very strong feeling in this poem. its so true, and very sad..... |
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Re: What Is Wrong With You?
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by chaos78 on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 09:30:10 AM AEST
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| this was great read hope people dont follow the same path |
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