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I Can't
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 07:32:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I can’t give the moon fore it is not mine to give,
I can’t give you the sun fore I’m not the chosen one,
I can’t give you the ocean fore it would not compare to my devotion,
But given a chance or maybe a second glance,
A conversation may lead to passion beyond your imagination,
Open your soul allow me to fill that empty hole,
I can’t give you wealth fore I have none myself,
I can’t ensure you fame, I wasn’t given a gift to make my name,
I can’t say you’ll go down in history, all I ask is that you believe in me,
All I can give is me, a simple man filled with dreams,
How about friendship, just pick up the phone, I’m at your fingertips,
What about my time, give me a chance to show you my passionate side?
Finally my love, my heart, my soul, you’re all I can think of.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2006-03-17 07:32:03]
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Re: I Can't
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 07:54:56 AM AEST
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that is all a woman could really ask for...well written
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Re: I Can't
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by shelby on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 09:28:13 AM AEST
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I agree with Shari. Such a heart touching write.
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Re: I Can't
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by Alison on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 09:39:02 AM AEST
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| very beautiful feeling in this poem. awesome write! |
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Re: I Can't
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 09:53:57 AM AEST
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Hi Matt..this is so honestly written....I love it.
It reminds me of a song my husband played for me before we got married...-(All I Have To Offer You...is standing right in front of me for you to see...lol...I think it was a Charle Pride song.
Say Hi to Tracie for me...
Hugs
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Re: I Can't
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 10:35:26 AM AEST
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| Well written. Honest and to the point. Very sweet....Mike |
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Re: I Can't
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 01:44:57 PM AEST
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| Wondeful write. I know how this feels i'm kind of in the same boat. Hope that person picks up the phone and calls you |
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Re: I Can't
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by whiteleo1984 on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 05:26:10 PM AEST
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| there's only one word i can say for this... awesome |
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