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The Last Poem
Contributed by
Astralbermudian
on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 05:38:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The Last Poem
My blood feels as if it's completely engulfed in flames,
I need to escape this pain,
The only way I can think of how to avoid this suffering,
Is by thrusting a knife through my vein.
Please mother don't cry when you get the call,
Hearing the words of me in critical condition,
I know mother I told you I'd give my all,
But sadly this will be my last rendition.
Is there a way to escape without me having to die?
Is there really a place where my soul will be sound?
I could run but that would make me the centre of the public eye,
And there is also the problem of being found.
So mother what can I do to escape this pain?
I guess I'm gonna have to resort to using this knife.
Mother don't cry, you aren't the one to blame,
Goodbye mother, it's finally time to end my life.
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Astralbermudian
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2006-03-17 05:38:22]
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Re: The Last Poem
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 01:56:29 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel. I sometimes feel the same way. Hope you get past that feeling. Good write. Keep writing b/c it does help to get those emotions out. Great write |
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Re: The Last Poem
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by weeme on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 08:09:52 AM AEST
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hey i no how u feel i feel like that alot but hey if i can still stand strong u can also do it keep writing it is good to express ur self espically through words in poems good write
sure check mine out some time xxx good luck |
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