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Lost
Contributed by
Dawny
on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 04:38:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Lost
In a world of darkness and pain
Wondering
Will I ever feel normal again
Trapped
In a vicious circle of guilt and doubt
Thinking
Will I ever find my way out
Angry
That I was made to feel this way
Hoping
That one day soon I can make him pay
Alone
No one else really understands
Scared
I’m not sure anyone can
Lost
In a world of nightmares and shame
Longing
That one day I will be me again
Copyright ©
Dawny
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2006-03-17 04:38:47]
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Re: Lost
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by stew777 on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 04:50:24 AM AEST
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Emotion Feelings here in this well put together Piece.
I feel sure you will be able to move on. Nice write heartfelt
been in the same place and finally found peace.
God Bless you Good Luck. |
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Re: Lost
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 06:14:32 AM AEST
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Very , very well constructed work, excellent in fact.
J |
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Re: Lost
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by ilovelillbj on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 08:14:02 AM AEST
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| timing isnt perfect but hey im not claiming mine is hehe... a really good poem with emotive effects. i hope you have since found yourself again.. x |
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Re: Lost
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by Alison on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 09:43:34 AM AEST
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| very moving and deep. great write! |
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Re: Lost
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 10:37:46 AM AEST
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| Well constructed write of inner thought.....Mike |
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Re: Lost
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by AliB on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 04:57:33 PM AEST
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Oh Dawny,
You will find yourself again. Keep being strong and look to your wonderful future.
Great, heartfelt words, you still got it girl!!
Love Ali xxxx |
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