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These Feelings Part 2

Contributed by lonely_boy on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 11:38:40 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm here in my room depressed once again
I can’t get rid of these feelings from within
Songs that speak to me in a special kind of way
Translated into words that I'm afraid to say
Writing them out seems to help me a great deal
I can say, or write, what it is that I feel
Feelings of anger, but more so feelings of sorrow
Down on my knees, head bowed, I'm praying for a better tomorrow
Thoughts of never-ending loneliness have taken their toll
Breaking my heart, my flesh, and abducting my soul
Silence is what has seemed to have overcome my life
Along with morbid thoughts of wanting to die
I know better not to accept these thoughts but it’s so hard
I’d give anything to be dealt other cards
They say that He is the one who has made me
But is He impressed with all the mistakes He’s seen
I would like to change my ways to make Him glad
Though these feelings, if gone, I would wish I had
Bad news heard again from a person that I love
We were doing so well but I guess “He’s” had enough
I guess I deserve it for all that I’ve done
But at least have the dignity to spare me just this one
We cared for each other just so damn much
Now we cry in our rooms praying for one last touch
It hasn’t happened and maybe it never will
So until it does my heart will just sit still
Breaths of air suddenly taken without warning
All day in my room, crying, from the night until morning
Jesus, I beg you, just make me feel alright
Send me an angel to watch and care for me tonight
Prayer unanswered I wonder what I did wrong
Maybe He wasn’t listening to me all along

Copyright Â© lonely_boy ... [ 2006-03-16 23:38:40]
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Re: These Feelings Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 06:17:38 PM AEST
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Thoughts of never-ending loneliness have taken their toll
Breaking my heart, my flesh, and abducting my soul

Wow, very deep emotions. Amazing write. : )

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