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...Here Lies
Contributed by
Opium
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Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I come and visit you everyday
But I never dare to say
This question that I've hidden for so long
You and I together we belong
Today I finally found the courage to stand
With a golden ring in my hand
Hoping that you would agree
To share your life with me
Maybe I was a little late
But I believe in our fate
So will you marry me my dear
And in my heart, light a sear
I know that you need to think for few hours
So I will put this ring next to yesterday's flowers
And wait next to your resting place
Sending another prayer to the space
Copyright ©
Opium
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2003-01-30 18:40:00]
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Re: ...Here Lies
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by kegs04 on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 06:50:00 PM AEST
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aww thats so sad! I really enjoyed it tho, very poetic, and..tragic..
~peace out |
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Re: ...Here Lies
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 07:09:34 PM AEST
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| Ohhh my friend...what a heartbreaker. Very well done! Larry |
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Re: ...Here Lies
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 08:56:01 PM AEST
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Wow...this was so sad..but so beautifully written....
Jenni |
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Re: ...Here Lies
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 12:19:31 PM AEST
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OMG How sad this was, and so pinful,I'm sure on day you'll be together again,standing before GOD!
Great sad poem! Christina |
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Re: ...Here Lies
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by gina on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 11:07:37 AM AEST
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i didnt expect this end , duh , this is sad ,but since its not true then :)
save the ring for a living girl lol
GINA |
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Re: ...Here Lies
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by notaprettygirl on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 12:00:19 AM AEST
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| very painfully raw and beautiful. it's as if you've peeked into my heart and wrote of my very own life. excellent write, opium. ;) |
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Re: ...Here Lies
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by psyonara on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 05:39:25 AM AEST
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| Very powerful, especially with the ending in that way. Keep writing! :) |
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