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Venting
Contributed by
BSteel
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Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 07:07:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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corruption runs deep,
thicker than blood,
vested interests,
wish I could just rest,
about my stolen documents,
but the Feds are crawling down my neck,
labeled as a "dissident",
just cause I said my family is a whole solid unit,
and they have no philosphical or natural grounds to not respect that,
this is like the Soviet Union under Brezhnev,
idealogy and values went out the door over their head,
i'm in to deep this isn't a game enoough said about that,
just know I come from the city of Pittsburgh,
and I used to run the streets with a steel hand,
my brain has been so ehaustted,
in transmitting God's message,
things i have predicted,
sins i have committed,
but then again I was extorted and robbed,
by my own coutnrymen,
for I talked of world peace,
did I really ever though turn my back on them?
well if I did then ***** them,
for my family entered society as a family,
not for power hungry indivuals to set their simple agendas.
Copyright ©
BSteel
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2006-03-16 19:07:08]
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Re: Venting
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by boobiepeach on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 07:14:49 PM AEST
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strong words
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Re: Venting
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by Ineedanap on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 07:52:31 PM AEST
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| Strong, very stron! I absolutely loved it! I could really feel it. I beleive this is one of your best poems. |
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Re: Venting
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by DarkFaerie on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 09:00:04 PM AEST
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| Extremely powerful write. Great job. : ) |
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