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A Time Rememberd

Contributed by insur93nt on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

14 years ago there wasnt much i knew
a room filled with many beds
children laughing, crying, playing
many not knowing whats in their future
with no care in the world
some waiting some watching
we sat watchin friends leave
we sat woundering why and were they went
never to see them ever again
we wounderd when it was our turne.

Not much after it was a sunny day
we saw a woman and a man
walking up and around the playground
looking and studying all the children
then they came to us and stared
that day we sat and wounderd
who were they why were they there
we didnt get our awnser till after
though different what ran through our minds
we finally had a family, though not complete now.

We walked through the playground together
in our minds we see that day we met
the day fate brought us together
now we remeber it seems like a dream
a time so sublime, so sureal
we see people whom we havnt for so many years
or maybee its just their ghosts
we leave with faund memories
they will never leave our minds and heart
but still we cant help but shed a tear.

Copyright © insur93nt ... [ 2006-03-16 19:00:00]
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Re: A Time Rememberd (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 08:55:32 PM AEST
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Very touching write. Keep up the good work. : )

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