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Love's Betrayal
Contributed by
karandrews
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Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 11:48:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Oh, the oaths you proclaimed
With your hand on the Bible
For your love hath no shame
My undying disciple
My cupped beggar's hands
Filled up to the edge
Must have spilled over
Your lover's sworn pledge
For the altar of vice
You gave unto thee
In simple sacrifice
To love my enemy
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karandrews
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2006-03-16 11:48:11]
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Re: Love's Betrayal
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by DarkFaerie on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 09:11:00 PM AEST
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For the altar of vice
You gave unto thee
In simple sacrifice
To love my enemy
Nice job : ) |
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Re: Love's Betrayal
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by Lilly-Quill on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 04:24:55 PM AEST
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This is a uniquely stunning and profound muse.
As William Blake once said: "Thy friendship oft has made my heart to ache: do be my enemy for friendship's sake."
Masterfully intriguing!
~*Lilly-Quill
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