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Mr Two Man Paranoia...
Contributed by
markymark
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Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 04:51:52 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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Welcome Mr Two Man...Mr Paranoia
i'm so glad that you could make it
the roar is getting higher
I hope that you can hear this, before you go to bed
he told me that you need to talk, before you lose your head
Welcome Mr Schitzo
he wonders what you think you know
whispered words not very clear
is Mr Two Man welcome here
Welcome to his world of pain
in company he's yet to gain
the upper hand, he's not what you see
the Paronoia Skitz in me
Goodnight Mr Schitzo, hope you sleep so sound
hope your dreams are what they seem
and not whats left around
Sleep tight Mr Two Man...Mr Paranoia
steer yourself to heaven, dont go near that fire
dont be swayed by voices, they'll leave you in such mess
goodnight Mr Two Man, sleep softly and God bless
MDM...26/07/02...
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Re: Mr Two Man Paranoia...
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by skinny-little-punk on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 05:03:29 PM AEST
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| This is very interesting... I like the rhyme sceme and the general theme. It's very good... |
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Re: Mr Two Man Paranoia...
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 01:14:44 AM AEST
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This is as powerful and gripping as when I read it the first time round Mark...excellent.
Chrissie xx |
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Re: Mr Two Man Paranoia...
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by chatabox on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 06:20:44 AM AEST
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this is very interesting, it gives me a better insight to what it really is like....its a little scarey.
Powerful write1 |
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