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Would you?
Contributed by
DarkFaerie
on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 07:43:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If I died tomorrow
Would your world
Cease to turn
Would you notice
Or would life go on
As if I never
Existed at all
If I loved you
Would you take
Me back again
Or would you turn
Your back on me
Pretend not to notice
If I showed up
Crying at your door
Would you welcome
Me with open arms
Or would you
Never forget all the
Pain I caused.
Would you be able
To start again
Or would you
Leave me
Dying inside
Like I did
Once to you
Copyright ©
DarkFaerie
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2006-03-15 19:43:28]
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Re: Would you?
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by eggflipper on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 07:53:49 PM AEST
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| Wonderfully captured heartache. We all die a bit when love is denied. |
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Re: Would you?
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by thesinner on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 07:56:55 PM AEST
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| Very powerful, and sorrowful. |
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Re: Would you?
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 08:04:00 PM AEST
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awesome write! this has so much emotion and longing wrapped up in it. I'm sure that special someone will ALWAYS love you no matter what.... A++++
I understand why you did it... |
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Re: Would you?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 09:44:49 PM AEST
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A peice of poetry that trancends reality, a question reflecting hope and hopelessness at the same time. you have a nice style, delicate even when in turmoil of the heart. a lovely and sad write at the same time.
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Re: Would you?
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 10:22:19 PM AEST
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Very nice piece! it's good to see some fine
wordplay and brutally honest material
Would you be able
To start again
Or would you
Leave me
Dying inside
Like I did
Once to you
very good, i love it
keep it up!!!!
dw |
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Re: Would you?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 12:35:44 AM AEST
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Odd how feelings can change...isn't it...or do they?
Great outpouring, I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: Would you?
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 06:11:16 PM AEST
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"If I showed up
Crying at your door
Would you welcome
Me with open arms
Or would you
Never forget all the
Pain I caused.
Would you be able
To start again....?"- I'd always welcome you back! the door never closed... you just have to take that "first" step... so that we can start again....
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