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Black Roses
Contributed by
moneyking89
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Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 07:40:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Oh how far the black roses bloom,
Oh how they send me to my doom.
Oh how swiftly the lilies swirl in oceans of green grandeur,
Oh how thou soul stays forever pure.
Oh how beautifully from the vague darkness light shines into your eyes,
Oh how they banish the dismal whispers and cries,
Oh how profound is my love for you my dear,
I implore of you with heart so sincere.
Remember this but don't be distraught and bitter.
For this bond does not grow old,
Consecrated it is for if your heart becomes cold.
Betwixt your agony and depression,
My love for you will forevermore be in session.
This love perceives no boundaries.
Like the light that glistens in your golden green eyes,
So for you my love never dies.
-Delta
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Re: Black Roses
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by DarkFaerie on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 07:53:09 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. I loved the images you brought forth in this poem. Keep up the good work. : ) |
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Re: Black Roses
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by eggflipper on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 07:55:42 PM AEST
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| A wonderful confession. The repetition serves well. |
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Re: Black Roses
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by slogan on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 08:32:26 PM AEST
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| great write...jh |
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Re: Black Roses
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by Alison on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 02:12:46 AM AEST
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| it brought tears to my eyes with its strong feeling! great write! |
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