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Contributed by
whiteleo1984
on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 04:52:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Your eyes show a heartache that only a few have felt
Your actions show a grace that only a few will know
Your smile cheers the soul of those around you
Your attitude shows a determination that only a few will realize
Your heart was broken, this I know
cause your eyes told me so
but I kno that life will move on
and your heart's love will once again begin it's song
maybe tomorrow or even today
love will once again be coming yur way
and I hope and pray
that you will notice that someday
you remind me of myself in the past
of those days that I thought will always last
but I began to realize something inside
and I began to cry
you touched my heart with your tears
and I wanted to help you relieve your fears
but am I able? am I willing?
the answer is always yes
why is that I will never know
but I will get you to the next show
and you will glide and begin to dance
and your soul will start it's chant
that the way I see you today
and I hope you will understand that in some way
you have more inside that you ever knew
if you only realize what I see in you
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whiteleo1984
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2006-03-15 16:52:35]
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Re: You
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by chaos78 on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 05:13:34 PM AEST
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| nice sounds like u care for this person a lot |
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Re: You
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 05:25:23 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: You
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by Amazon on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 05:54:04 PM AEST
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| i love this poem it makes me think of one of my friends who is always there for me, you being there for this person plrobably means more to them then they will ever let you know i hope this girl reads it and realises how much you care and how valuable you are in her life |
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Re: You
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by Alison on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 01:14:06 PM AEST
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| you no, i bet that the girl u r take'n bout feels very blessed to have someone like u care bout her! |
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