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alone
Contributed by
jamielynn
on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 12:50:50 PM in AEST
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I'm alone
not physicaly
but mentally
I'm alone
I just want someone to talk to
someone to understand
my feelings
and thoughts
and most of all me
I'm alone
no matter what I do
no matter what I say
I'm alone
at any place
at any time
I'm alone
it's an empty feeling
it's a worthless feeling
it's a feeling of no love, of no hope, no pride, and no thought
and yet i'm still alone
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2006-03-15 12:50:50]
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Re: alone
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by eggflipper on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:33:41 PM AEST
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| such despair yet I can relate. It sounds funny to some, they don't understand how you can be lonely amongst people. Connections are lost. Hopefully, it is inner philosophies and understanding we find strength, hope, pride, thought and ultimately love. Let compassion guide you. |
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Re: alone
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by thesinner on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 03:55:45 PM AEST
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| I feel like that everyday. I know that emptiness you feel, it's like a heaviness crushing your chest, I wake up with it and it never seems to go away..Great write, great expression. |
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Re: alone
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by weeme on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 04:18:40 AM AEST
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i can totally relate to that poem and understand it completley i fell like that most of the time but we all need to make people understand and let them no how it feels so they can enjoy a well wrote poem
well done=-)
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