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Tears Of Stone
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 10:27:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Look into my eyes, I was heart broke by design,
I知 always on a search, but what I seek I can稚 be sure,
Is it lust or is it love, is it peace or is it blood,
Am I lonely or am I confused, I never win I always lose,
Am I alive or am I dead, is this real or all in my head,
I awake each morning to a new day, only to feel my heart wither away,
I知 lost in this maze we call life, unaware if I知 really alive,
Is my sprit broken, swallow my pride and I知 choking,
Empty is my soul without you to hold,
I知 so confused, but God has a plan, I just wish I knew,
I walk the streets to the rhythm of a single heartbeat,
I see your face formed by the stars; you池e so close but yet so far,
The moon shines upon my tear soaked face; I feel the warmth of her embrace,
Is someone out there, is she looking for me, or am I a fool living in a dream,
Is love a myth, or is it a gift,
Am I meant to be alone, or can a heart be healed by tears of stone.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
Copyright ﾂｩ
The_Phantom
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2006-03-15 10:27:22]
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Re: Tears Of Stone
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by Nothingness on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 10:33:47 AM AEST
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| Very nice write i liked the line "Is someone out there, is she looking for me, or am I a fool living in a dream," because i had wrote a poem ecactly the opisite of fools liveing in dreams :P mine was only fools face reality great write though keep it up |
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by weeme on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 10:54:34 AM AEST
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| a very good write i enjoyed it cause it made me think and very good imagery |
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Re: Tears Of Stone
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by Alison on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 11:48:58 AM AEST
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| very great and moving poem. and to answer the last few lines 4 u...love is the greatest gift, besides life, to ever be given to a person. i know b/c i have given love once b4. and he did not want it, said he did, than through it out. but still no one deserves to be loved and thats one of the things that make it so amazing. the real question is, when love is given to you (and one day it will be) will you be able to receive and return that love? |
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Re: Tears Of Stone
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 12:47:22 PM AEST
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Universal in its message so many are asking the same questions...well spoken as always
Shari |
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Re: Tears Of Stone
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:27:47 PM AEST
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such a sad and deep poem, I have missed your work a great deal, well written and very touching!!!
take care
Pix xx |
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Re: Tears Of Stone
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:33:34 PM AEST
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This was amazing. I loved this. You have a way with writing that makes it just... amazing.. Great poem..
take care
christina |
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Re: Tears Of Stone
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by worldsenigma on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 03:10:59 PM AEST
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| very nice write. It lost flow at one point tho. sounds like it could make a pretty cool song actually. its similar to some stuff i do. It would make a really good free verse. check out my poem my moon. Its similar...could give u some ideas |
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Re: Tears Of Stone
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 03:44:29 PM AEST
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Oh Matt this is touched with much sadness. You have moved me to tears. A lovely write holding onto your heart strings. Are you going to be ok my friend???
huge hugssssss
Michelle |
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Re: Tears Of Stone
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by slogan on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 08:28:57 PM AEST
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| great piece of work...jh |
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Re: Tears Of Stone
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by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 01:21:47 AM AEST
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| amazing write. |
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