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In My Eyes
Contributed by
silver_runaway
on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 10:10:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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In my eyes you were the greatest
You used to be my hero;
In my eyes you did nothing wrong
You made me want to be a better person;
In my eyes you were beautiful
You may have been the one for me;
In my eyes you were like a rock
I always felt safe when I was in your arms;
In my eyes you had it all
I wanted to be just like you once;
In my eyes you could've ruled the world
You had so much talent;
In my eyes you were my world
I was so innocent and stupid;
In my eyes I loved you
I would've done anything for you;
In my eyes you never changed
I don't even know you now
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2006-03-15 10:10:25]
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Re: In My Eyes
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by Nothingness on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 10:35:40 AM AEST
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| Great write i felt alot of emotion was put in to it keep up the great work |
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Re: In My Eyes
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 11:30:05 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: In My Eyes
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by Alison on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 12:02:56 PM AEST
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| very good. clearly stated. and i've been through that too... |
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