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the last beating
Contributed by
Engarde
on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ThankYouPoems
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The
interfering
old *****
next door
called again
objecting
complaining
protesting
the noise
my screams
All
slow motion now
amplified
moments
handcuffs bite
denying
imploring
bleeding
my fault
my shame
Time
sneaks away.
psyche stitches
thoughts whirl
reflecting
regretting
obsessing
as I
never did
thank her.
Copyright ©
Engarde
... [
2003-01-30 12:30:00]
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Re: the last beating
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by aernby on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 04:23:49 PM AEST
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good write
aern+ |
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Re: the last beating
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by Garethuk on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 06:25:32 PM AEST
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| Complex and real, you have much talent, keep at it. |
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Re: the last beating
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 12:03:29 PM AEST
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| Wow ... good write ... I love how you ended it. |
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Re: the last beating
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by Engarde on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 05:57:16 AM AEST
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Thank you, I thought the 2nd stanza was weak but I really wasn't sure how to fix it.
Thank you all for reading it! |
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Re: the last beating
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by tawakwan on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 08:13:29 PM AEST
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| deep,very deep. |
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