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Disconnected
Contributed by
darkscorpio
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Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 07:35:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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If I could feel again, connect with a heart
Would I do it so I wouldn’t feel so torn apart
Would I follow the curiosities, that run in my mind
Searching for a love that I might never find
Do I connect because I’m lonely, do I connect just to feel
Or stay trapped inside this turmoil that might turn my heart to steel
Craving and wanting an intimacy erased
But afraid to move too fast, on the fear of more disgrace
Trying to move ahead, get life back on track
But afraid of the future, and the love I now lack
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darkscorpio
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2006-03-15 07:35:08]
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Re: Disconnected
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by thesinner on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 09:00:32 AM AEST
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| I can relate completely.In fact I've been working on a similar poem.I've always felt disconnected, alien to those around me.I enjoyed this piece. Great write! |
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Re: Disconnected
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by Nothingness on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 10:42:59 AM AEST
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| Great write i can also relate to this poem it carries a lot of emotion in it :) keep it up |
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Re: Disconnected
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 11:41:54 AM AEST
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| great piece, i too can relate |
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Re: Disconnected
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by punkprincess6689 on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 05:30:29 PM AEST
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| i really enjpyed ur poem. it was great. i can relate to it also, ive been feeling alot like that lately |
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