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i'm getting worse

Contributed by ashleigh4 on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



i can't take it anymore,
i walk away, towards the door.
my path is dark, i don't despair-
anywhere is better than here.
i feel my journey ending now,
i soon will take the final bow
and watch the curtains end this scene-
a melodrama, the "depressed teen".

the journey doesn't scare me much-
i long to feel the razor's touch
and leave this place of sadness and fear
girl, get yourself out of here...




Copyright © ashleigh4 ... [ 2003-01-30 12:00:00]
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Re: i'm getting worse (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 12:04:26 PM AEST
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I know you dont want to do this your poems are a cry for help,Please get the help you need!
I dont know what happens to spirits when they commit suicide but I believe they have to go through life all over again instead of going to Heaven,So please think this over If your a teen things will get better they did for me! Hang in there! Christina


Re: i'm getting worse (User Rating: 1 )
by D-Day on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 03:36:15 PM AEST
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I know how it is. Being inside a darkness that you can't seem to get out of and always looking for that light to guide you through it all. There is a light out there, sometimes you just have to search for it though. Trust me, I am still looking for mine, but doing that is just saying that you failed. Don't take the easy way out, fight it off and it will get better. "Everything is ok in the end, and if it's not, then it is not the end." I know I don't know you, but please consider my adivce and that of others, you don't want to do that.


Re: i'm getting worse (User Rating: 1 )
by aernby on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 04:36:59 PM AEST
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this is a good poem. it is well written and shows talent.

it also scares the hell out of me--

You are in pain. no doubt about it. i have felt that pain both as a 'depressed teen' and as an adult. girl, i am here to tell you that there is help and hope for you in this life - - -

get help; please see a doctor
get help

aern+


Re: i'm getting worse (User Rating: 1 )
by Garethuk on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 06:22:13 PM AEST
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A path can be dark but your eyes adjust with time, Ive been in bad places seemingly with no way out at first I guess i was just stubborn and that got me through, but looking back now things are infinately better, non of us can see the future dont deprive yourself of the light you seek, the path to it may be longer than you think but it will end, seek the light dont give in to the dark its not worth the price.


Re: i'm getting worse (User Rating: 1 )
by Patterz on Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 06:50:03 PM AEST
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hey dude
please hold on..ur poetry is beautiful and it gives me hope to know i am not alone with the way i feel..........I'm not gonna give u n e of those corny lines about how it all gets better and this is all part of the big plan...just say i care about you and that I want to help n e way i can. please please please hold on. If you ever want to talk.......honesly send me a message or email me at goaliegurl@hotmail.com.........im worried about you and I know if n e thing happened to you i'd be really upset...
stay strong.....your an incredible person
Patterz


Re: i'm getting worse (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 11:13:58 AM AEST
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Please, Ashleigh, please don't do it. I've tried it, and it's not good. i'm still in the same damn hole, and i'm not gettin better, but please, try and stay strong. though i don't know you, if your poetry is anything to go by, you're an amazing person, and you don't deserve this. please hold on, and you'l make it. please. it's an amazin poem, lots of love, MxXx


Re: i'm getting worse (User Rating: 1 )
by Valkyra on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 02:16:24 AM AEST
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Very good write. And I know how you feel.


Re: i'm getting worse (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 01:49:59 PM AEST
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Lovely poem. I too feel the way you do. It is hard being a teenager but its just hard being a person in general. Just hold your head up and be stronge. There's light at the end of every tunnel.




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