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rain and cold
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 08:35:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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rain and cold
You are not a blank screen then why
Am I paralysed or anxious?
Perhaps you are
A promise waiting to be broken,
a prize entry only hopeful…
Newspapers in the trash.
Glass and metal and many things
reflect my head
in my hands and is this new and can I escape?
I’m dissatisfied and disillusioned.
Rainbows always followed by tempests,
Black clouds and driving rain and I always knew.
I’m only a kid and life is not real.
for me it’s all a joke and when I die will I be happy?
It’s a sigh of apathetic wind through caverns
shaking head and no faith
I might as well implode to stare out of windows in diapers.
Drool and not think. Have no one that loves me anymore and not care.
I can’t imagine what I know at every corner and breath I have to anticipate;
always I tire of knowing the worst will come.
Because if I don’t, I’ll be blindsided
like all those other times.
So now I must obsess over it.
Instil the worst before it happens to be prepared.
To be blunt, I can’t stand
knowing my life will surely progress,
and everything I fear will be realized.
Cannot hold on,
and condemn bliss to flames to affirm it would have been so nevertheless.
So what is the point of a future ?
Existing aside myself to subject myself
to this torture of my mind of my own making?
Too smart for my own good
and the cliché’s right this time, so **** me up
before I do, and I will withdraw.
Beware when you hear nothing of me ever again.
Beware when I consume myself because I know no other way
And I’m despaired and apathetic as before and always…
I shall give up now,
because a life in which I sabotage all happiness
to pad the impact of inevitable sadness
means rain and cold.
It means I’ll never feel joy
because I won’t let myself be let down.
And in that is there a hope of survival?
Existence above water?
…...I might as well stop writing now.
[2006-03-13 22:17:58]
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Re: rain and cold
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by iodinelove on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 09:02:31 PM AEST
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You know what I hate about this site (or maybe the people on it) if you post something long people don't read it. That's a shame...more so when I come across something like this. I raise my cup to you mon ami (mes ami?)
WRITE EVERYTHING! [ignore the boxes]
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Re: rain and cold
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 12:27:37 AM AEST
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Too bad ***** I read this and thought this
was awesomeness personified or
something along those lines.
"It’s a sigh of apathetic wind through caverns
shaking head and no faith"
Loved those two lines my friend, but don't
give in to apathy you can accomplish so
much if you apply yourself. It can be hard to
move beyond the constraints we put around
ourselves but one step forward can make
those constraints come crashing down. Don't
put limits onyourself bro and don't settle for
mediocrity. In my opinion you've settled for
mediocrity for too long and you need to step
beyond the limitations you've set up for
yourself. You're an awesome dude and an
awesome friend and you deserve better than
the apathy that afflicts you now.
In other news this was a great poem and I
hope you can find the answers to the many
questions that you ask in this write.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: rain and cold
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 12:21:35 AM AEST
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First, I want to say excellent job at getting my attention! If you say somthing like "Do not read this," how can I resist? It's like seeing something disgusting.. you don't want to look, you know you shouldn't look.. but you can't resist. You HAVE to look. Well, that's how I felt.
Now on with the poem!! Wow, this was definatly an awesome write! I don't know what else to say, really.
Loved it!!! |
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