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Do You
Contributed by
Lulubelle5
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Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 08:14:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Do you see me?
You think that you do
Yet the tears on my face
Are invisble to you.
Do you hear me?
You think that you do
Yet hearing and listening
Are different than you know.
Do you feel me?
You think that you do
Yet my aching wounds
Are left unhealed.
Do you know me?
You think that you do
Yet what you think means
Nothing to the stranger
Standing before you.
Copyright ©
Lulubelle5
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2006-03-14 20:14:06]
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Re: Do You
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by DarkFaerie on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 08:28:19 PM AEST
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Wow, amazing write.
Do you see me?
You think that you do
Yet the tears on my face
Are invisble to you.
I know this feeling oh so well. Great job, keep up the good work. : ) |
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Re: Do You
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 08:42:20 PM AEST
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ooh, i loved it, short, but to the point, really great write. sounded a little like on of mine.."too late", check it out if you feel like it.
~natalya |
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Re: Do You
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 08:42:37 PM AEST
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ooh, i loved it, short, but to the point, really great write. sounded a little like one of mine.."too late", check it out if you feel like it.
~natalya |
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Re: Do You
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by Nothingness on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 09:02:43 PM AEST
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| nice write right to the point keep it up |
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Re: Do You
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 10:28:52 PM AEST
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wow i liked the flow of this and very well expressed. I can relate to this.. and a few people i know can.. awesome job
JENNI |
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Re: Do You
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 06:02:40 PM AEST
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| well done |
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