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Behold
Contributed by
pisces101
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Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 07:12:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Behold
I am your angel not in disguise
I will bring down the stars
and put them behind your eyes.
and the sight of heaven will be ours
you will never worry of the grass
between your toes
I will create diamonds in smooth glass
For you to walk upon in clothes….
Clothes of golden threads
That I have spun from my golden love
You will never be unprotected
You are strong as the shield thereof
My hands will paint us wings
And you may travel far and wide
May the stress never lay a burden on what you sing.
Your voice will be glorified
With my love and verse
You will be free and released
The weight on your shoulders reversed.
You shall only live in peace
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Re: Behold
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 07:27:06 PM AEST
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| its a very good piece ty for posting it |
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Re: Behold
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 07:27:07 PM AEST
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| its a very good piece ty for posting it |
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Re: Behold
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by Spike on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 05:32:27 AM AEST
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I agree with you - I think this is your best.
Spike |
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Re: Behold
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 09:48:18 AM AEST
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I really like it. You seem to form yourself into something like God in this poem, all giving and all understanding; only wanting to help. Fantastic write
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