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Wounded Soul
Contributed by
DarkFaerie
on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 06:54:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Wanting to leave
Yet wanting to
Not run away
Again
Missing my life
As it goes
Flying past
Can you change
Be how we
Used to be?
I miss the laughter
The stolen kisses
The gentle caresses
I miss your eyes
Staring deep into mine
I miss your arms
Holding me so tight
I miss
Everything
Even the things
That drove me
So far away
But most of all
I miss your heart
The other half
Of my wounded soul
I ache for you
With all my being
I wish I could
Just stop this pain
Copyright ©
DarkFaerie
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2006-03-14 18:54:20]
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Re: Wounded Soul
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 07:00:34 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful poem
lots of emotion
great write |
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Re: Wounded Soul
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 07:08:31 PM AEST
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oh how i know this feeling... you've captured it perfectly. great write A++++ --But most of all
I miss your heart
The other half
Of my wounded soul-- very touching |
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Re: Wounded Soul
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by ChinaRivera on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 07:42:10 PM AEST
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| that was a lovely poem. Very sweet. |
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Re: Wounded Soul
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 09:02:35 PM AEST
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what a sad and tearful write this is beautiful in a somber way. in time things will work out
i wish you all the best.
Ben |
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Re: Wounded Soul
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 11:02:08 PM AEST
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Crushingly beautiful and so sad.
I feel the emotion, well written. |
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Re: Wounded Soul
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by Alison on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 01:40:04 AM AEST
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| wow i loved it. i no how u feel...very good write! |
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Re: Wounded Soul
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:31:20 PM AEST
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a very beautifully written poem, great use of emotion here, excellent work!!
hugs
pix xx |
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