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to be trapped inside a lie

Contributed by needs_change on Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 04:55:58 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



you say that i am perfect
but please try to understand
i am not everything
that you think i am

you say you love my smile
and the way i laugh with you
i don't want to tell you
that this all untrue

my best friend is the only one
that can make my smile real
but when shes not around
its only pain i feel

i wish that i could tell you
but i don't know myself
this sadness has overcome me
maybe one day i'll be well

you filled me with this sickness
and you slowly watch me die
but do you even know
that i am hurting inside

i try my best to hide it
i think i do it well
but when you say things like that
i think that you can tell

small things that you say or ask
leave questions in my head
are here to help me
or will you leave me for dead

he left me more than once
maybe this is why
i am kinda scared of you
i get kinda shy

so please don't talk to me
any more than you have to
hello is ok
but dont say 'how r u'

you make it hard to move on
when your always there
i am not sure if it's pretend
or if you really care

one more time i'll talk to you
but i swear this will be the last
then i will find someone else to love
you can be my past




Copyright © needs_change ... [ 2006-03-14 16:55:58]
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Re: to be trapped inside a lie (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 09:06:57 PM AEST
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ok, well um, you pretty much stole that right outta my mouth there, not like i could've worded it nearly as well, but like i said..totally relate. really great write too, i loved it.

~natalya


Re: to be trapped inside a lie (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 01:44:32 AM AEST
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good write, very clear on the feelings.




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