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dust of man
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 04:42:57 PM in AEST
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If i light the world on fire
would you love to watch it burn
watch the fire flow
i will start the final show
we will burn the walls of history
bring back the dust of man
a silent plate of emptyness
we will burn and rape the land
a harvest of fire a cleansing in our wake
o set the world around as to watch and make it shake
let it burn and start a new rewrite the story clean
make up brand new laws start to furfil our dream
would you hold me close would you push me far
if i burnt the world and made the starting scar
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2006-03-14 16:42:57]
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Re: dust of man
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by thesinner on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 04:48:13 PM AEST
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| I really liked this .It's really different.Excellent. |
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Re: dust of man
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 05:55:49 PM AEST
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Clever!!
I enjoyed this!! |
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Re: dust of man
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by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 08:41:59 PM AEST
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i hope your not really that angry
nice expression |
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Re: dust of man
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 11:07:19 PM AEST
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| Nice job, Relic....interesting idea there. Peace to you, Laura |
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