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A to Z of my love
Contributed by
bethwood
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Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 03:51:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A lways be appreciative
B e kind and be sincere
C onfess your deepest feelings
D iscuss your darkest fears
E ven in your lowest times
F or there may well be some
G ive thanks to God our saviour
H ave hope of what's to come
I nvite someone to share your fun
J ust always keep in mind
K eep hold of friends you bond with
L eave the jealous ones behind
M ay your hearts forever guide you
N ot once ever hold you back
O f all the choices you will face
P romise you'll follow the right track
Q uestion if you feel the need
R emember what you're told
S ay you're sorry, when you are
T o admit you're wrong is bold
U nleash imagination
V ary your ideas
W ith Love to both my special boys
X xxxxx for coming years
Y ou are and always will be
Z ipped tight within my heart..........
......................................Now there has been the lessons
Of the Love thats in my heart.
Beth Wood
March'06.
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bethwood
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Re: A to Z of my love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Drapes on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 05:21:28 PM AEST (User
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Wow, I loved that! It's so sweet and it's such great advice! Nice job with the rhyming! And it's got a great flow!
Great job!
-Drapes |
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Re: A to Z of my love
(User Rating: 1 ) by bethwood on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 05:27:21 PM AEST (User
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thankyou. it helps to have someone elses opinion! am glad you liked it! |
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Re: A to Z of my love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Brasco on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 05:49:30 PM AEST (User
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Very heartfelt, I was wondering what you would do when you came to the letter X and I think you handled it beautifully. Well done. |
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Re: A to Z of my love
(User Rating: 1 ) by bethwood on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 08:38:45 AM AEST (User
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yes, thankyou. i too wondered how i would deal with X and was hoping it still carried the flow okay when i added it, your comment proves it must have done. much appreciated comments thankyou. |
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Re: A to Z of my love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 12:10:20 PM AEST (User
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Another one to frame in the boys' bedroom to read each morning. What a set of principles! Very good poem - don't ever short sell your talent - just keep on writing and posting! |
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