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Dying Plead
Contributed by
Nothingness
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Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 01:21:02 PM in AEST
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I want so much to find just one person I can rely on
Really though how hard is it to be called upon
I just need you to be there and be true
Everyone so far has lied, will it be different for you?
I cry so much from all of the lies and deceit
It’s every thing I can do not to lie down and admit my defeat
Why do I try if I know I will never find my need?
Please, please can’t anyone here my dying plead!
I can not hold on or wait forever, I feel myself growing weak
My trust is gone; to you I shall never again speak
I don’t know what to do, now that my world has faded
I am lost forever, alone and broke because me you never aided
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2006-03-14 13:21:02]
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Re: Dying Plead
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by eggflipper on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 02:32:13 PM AEST
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| Hopefully the right lesson is being learned here. Sorry about your path so far. |
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Re: Dying Plead
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 03:12:32 PM AEST
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well lessons are always learnt the hard way good write i hope you feel better
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Re: Dying Plead
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 09:20:26 PM AEST
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when i read the intro to the poem, i was like omg, cause the exact same thing happened to me just a few days ago, i decided to open up..and it blew up in my face when he pretended to care but then told everybody for a laugh. but anyway, lol.
very nicely worded, emotional write; i loved it.
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Re: Dying Plead
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by stew777 on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 03:10:08 AM AEST
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Trust does not come automatically in life. It has to be earned, you will learn from this I hope.
Neat poetry,
Take Care. |
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