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I only want you to be happy...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 01:48:15 AM in AEST
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I think of the day you left
And all the words we said
I can’t escape the pain
It still echoes in my head
I know that things are different now
It may never be the same
But that’s just how life goes
That’s the name of the game
I know I made you miserable
And made things horrid too
I know I made you hate your life
I never wanted that for you…
I know I screwed things up
I know I made it hard
I know that I am nothing…
I never meant to leave you scarred
I only want you to find happiness
And joy in all you have
I don’t want you to settle for me
If I’ve only made you sad…
I know that you found someone
And I hope he brings you bliss
I hope you find what you need
Deep inside his kiss…
I hope he’s what you wanted
I hope he fulfills your dreams
I hope he keeps his promises
I hope he’s what he seems…
I only want the best for you
I hope that much you see…
I only want you to be happy
Even if it’s not with me…
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by wikedladi on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 01:52:28 AM AEST
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| NIcely written! Poeple can go their whole lifetime and not be able to be as honest as this. Good job |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by Alison on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 02:43:18 AM AEST
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| wow that is so great that u want the other person to be happy! awesome poem! |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 06:08:56 AM AEST
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| Well done , a fine write |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 06:43:30 AM AEST
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| Very well written. I know exactly how you feel and you have said it the best Its not easy giving up the one that you love so they can be happy. Excellent way of showing your emotions and also an excellent poem. A+++++ |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by DarkFaerie on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 06:53:08 AM AEST
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| Powerful write, sometimes you only see what you had after you left it. : ) |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 08:28:01 AM AEST
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| I am in a similar position right now... it sucks but i just want my ex to be happy. This poem really spoke to me in such a beautifully painful way.... i hope you find someone that will care and love you back the way you could love someone. |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by thesinner on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 08:10:35 PM AEST
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| Excellent. very unselfish of you .Great write |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 10:55:27 PM AEST
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A greatly sad piece of letting go, wonderfully outpoured. well done!!
PS In the 6th stanza, did you mean "what" you need? |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by lonely_boy on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 12:39:46 AM AEST
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| that was a great write, man. so heartfelt and raw. i loved it. i'm actually going through the exact same thing. i hope all goes well with what you're going through. but things will be okay in the end. trust me. keep up the good work. |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by moses on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 07:13:17 PM AEST
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I never meant to hurt my ex-girlfriend either, and i too hope she finds bliss in her new boyfriend. Well written, a lot of people can relate to what you said here.
Keep it up,
-moses |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 02:10:19 AM AEST
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Powerful words well conveyed.
J. |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 20th March 2006 @ 07:31:49 PM AEST
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it takes a strong person to say these words.
shows strong character.
wonderful write
peach |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by brew on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 10:41:39 PM AEST
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The wors you pored out Chris, are simply atstounding......Wished you could have what you are feeling.! SAorry there is great saddness.........Beautiful heart filled write.! Good luck with all.....I hope things work out. Need to talk , I;ll listen
Brew~ |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by Archie on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 08:32:35 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem as always you write emotively and it is easy to get in touch with how you feel. This would be hard for me to say to someone I loved- to ask them if they would be happier without me you actually go one step further in your piece and that makes this a very noble work. |
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Re: I only want you to be happy...
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by summer on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 09:05:44 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful well done xxx |
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