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Trapped
Contributed by
nothingness
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Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 10:30:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I try so hard find my way back to the forgotten light
Memories and dreams come back to me clouding my sight
I want to much to be free from all of the darkness i have fallen into
i see i cant overcome this trial alone i hate to admit it but i am in need of a rescue
Untill my savior come to save me i will continue making attempts to be free
I dont know what the point is though i cant do it i cant do anything i am just me
Another night befalls me another time to be haunted by my dreams
I wish i was free but i am trapped here again listening to my silent screams
I dont know how long i will be trapped here in this world, in my prison
I wait for someone, anyone at all to find me and dry my tears of crimson
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2006-03-13 22:30:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Trapped
(User Rating: 1 ) by stew777 on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 08:23:30 AM AEST (User
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Nothingness,
It Takes Time and courage to move forward
You are doing the right thing by writing down your thoughts keep on as I know the day will come when the positives will replace some of the negatives.
I can see that you are reaching out in this poem and I think you have done a fantastic job in portraying how your feeling. Keep Writing.
I admire your courage.
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