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Ghost of a Girl
Contributed by
porcia
on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 07:47:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Her feet never grace the ground
The ghost that walks the streets
Her fingers trace the lines
Between the stones
On the fountain where she waits
For the girl that always sings
There is forever of this
Cloaked in white
Ruined and sad
Her dance is not with her anymore
Dust in her hair and scratches on her face
She has been crying so many times before
Pathetically she lies
Cobblestone streets covered in rain
Puddles reflecting the light of the city
They have returned
Dead and gone
It is her life, her right
It's not right
Cloaked in black
Restored and content
She dances like she never has before
Dust leaves her hair scratches disappear
She has been crying so many times before
Empty boxes laying on the streets
Filled with memories
You’d never know how much she wished
That was a past
When she lived now she is gone
A shell of what was before
The ghost in my mind
Cloaked in grey
Resolved and repenting
Her prayers are unanswered forevermore
Dust on her cross and scratches on her wrist
She has been crying so many times before
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Re: Ghost of a Girl
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 09:06:33 PM AEST
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whoa, something so dark yet sad about it....i absolutely loved this poem, amazing.
~natalya
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Re: Ghost of a Girl
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by Wingless_Faery on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 03:36:17 AM AEST
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| That is so beautiful! I can relate in so many ways. It's really really good! |
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Re: Ghost of a Girl
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by Lenore_Poe15 on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 07:29:51 AM AEST
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Good job. This poem flowed very well. One topic relating to the next. Very good.
-Lenore |
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Re: Ghost of a Girl
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by StephaniePaige on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 12:13:13 PM AEST
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I love the way this flowed, and the feeling put into it. I couldn't really relate, but it was beautifully written.
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