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Damaged Property
Contributed by
guiltycircles
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Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 06:23:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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always questioning where is my sun
why do i not smile at the sight of happiness
they wonder where has my sparkle gone
but i wonder if it was ever there
i am damaged property
no one knows what caused it
no one knows why
they just know that i'm dark, damaged property
scars are not just skin deep
but your thoughts are
my tears are in permanent marker
stop scrubbing at the pain
it wont go away,
cause im damaged property
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Re: Damaged Property
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by moses on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 06:38:16 PM AEST
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Been there before, though I've gotten out of it but coming back to it all seems inevitable. Well done, keep your head up.
-moses |
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Re: Damaged Property
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 08:11:32 PM AEST
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| Hey, good poem. I like this line: "my tears are in permanent marker". It's a cool visual. |
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Re: Damaged Property
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by stew777 on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 09:56:13 AM AEST
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nobody can fix "IT" only YOU.
Try Looking at the Glass Half Full Instead of half Empty.
Loved the write although a touch sad
One day I hope YOU will be able to turn those Scars into stars.
Good Luck. |
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