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Who Is She?
Contributed by
Mad-Mancunian
on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I try to live…
But I cannot, I only exist
Like some junkie deprived of his fix-
I now lie down to die
But my spirit stays anchored low
And my ghost says “No!”
Who am I? What is she
Who commands such undulated passions
From my nether limbs?
Who is she, my beloved liege;
Who can sanctify or profane
The conscience of my spirit?
For alas! logic fails me,
I call for answers, but the winds-
They moan and whisper;-
But nothing, nothing…
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Mad-Mancunian
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2003-01-30 08:00:00]
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Re: Who Is She?
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 10:21:28 AM AEST
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Excellent Renato Hoi Yew Wei,
If it were possible to love an inanimate object then this I probably would!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Who Is She?
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 08:57:47 PM AEST
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Deep questions here. Maybe the questions will be answered in time.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: Who Is She?
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 09:40:37 PM AEST
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| Splendid poem indeed!The word you use here is so excellent! Good! Good work! |
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Re: Who Is She?
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by karoody on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 10:47:52 PM AEST
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Love is a confusing thing with many sides. You portrayed this side beatifully and truthfully...I enjoyed this one from you
kara |
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Re: Who Is She?
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:06:48 AM AEST
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| Great poem. |
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