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Across The Hall
Contributed by
Drapes
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Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 03:34:00 PM in AEST
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Across the hall,
He jokes with his friends.
He leans on a locker,
His pride he defends.
Across the hall
He's so laid back and free.
But solid and firm
Like an old oak tree.
From his chestnut eyes,
Down to his shoes my gaze falls.
I admire him from afar,
All the way across the hall.
My voice clear to my ear.
Playful yet deep.
But across the hall
Is where my group keeps.
I'm tempted to go over,
Only three steps, maybe four.
But across the hall,
Is just a bit too far.
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Drapes
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2006-03-13 15:34:00]
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Re: Across The Hall
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by Alison on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 09:22:46 PM AEST
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| if u like him that much than he should be worth take'n a chance on right? very good write. |
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Re: Across The Hall
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by StephaniePaige on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 12:17:46 PM AEST
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This is something I can most definetly relate to. Very well written.
-Stephanie |
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