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They locked ME away
Contributed by
stew777
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Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 02:44:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Here I am long way from Home
Not allowed to talk on the phone
Severe depression locked me away
Why do I have to face another dull day
It"s MY life to do what I want to
What would ya do if it happened to you
The Hours drag on Do not want to speek
Peace and quietness is all I seek
I want to go They say I must stay
Do you think I should kneel and pray?
Doubt he will listen to stupid old me
I will just fade away in my dark misery.
stew
I wish it had not turned out this way
Severe depression locked me away.
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Re: They locked ME away
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 02:55:52 PM AEST
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first and foremost welcome to YPDC secondly I know how you feel!
Cheer yourself up and read some of my p**** poor attempts at humour!
(see how i just plugged my own work!)
Hope to read more from you.
Nice write.
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Re: They locked ME away
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 03:14:22 PM AEST
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welcome stew..
keep busy.. great write, yes all are taken care of by God, it is up to us to say yes, to receive what He gives. Nice sonnet..
I care.. keep writing..
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Re: They locked ME away
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by DarkFaerie on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 09:16:50 PM AEST
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| Great write. I love those last two lines. : ) |
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