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Dont look into the light
Contributed by
naughtygurl
on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 12:25:00 PM in AEST
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If you think you are alone,
in this messed up
lonely world.
Then dont pretend to be afraid
and face the truth with the pain
learn to overcome your sorrows,
trust me there will be tommarow
If you try to say its over,
give up always, fall forever
let it go , say good bye
But if you really wish for life,
then promise this and dont
Deny, your always wanted
I swear to you I love you.
Don't wish to die
tonight don't cry
I swear to you I need you
Dont look into the light
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2006-03-13 12:25:00]
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Re: Dont look into the light
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by Shmokin on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 12:35:59 PM AEST
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| nice poem, check spelling though, it makes it appear u don't care for your work :-) |
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Re: Dont look into the light
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by oreo_kisses on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 02:37:21 PM AEST
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| very good write i know i have wanted to tell ppl to basically shut up before including myself so great job! |
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