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Angels Gone
Contributed by
jasonw
on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Her face bruised
her body beaten
cold eyes staring
blankly towards the heavens
Hair matted with blood
breasts slashed
their beauty ruined
blood staining the body of an angel
The lights penetrate
through the window
red and blue, red and blue
one of those calls you pray you never get
The phone rings
the woman answers it
and drops the receiver
praying to God that they have the wrong number
Hundreds of people
no one knew how many cared
most are crying
I can’t seem to find the tears for her
All emotion has left me
my best friend is being lowered
the tears still won’t come
she is too young for this to be true
Years later
see her mother at the mall
no hellos are exchanged
we each blame ourselves
Should have seen it coming
could have stopped it
would have taken her place
if only I had been there a little earlier
God has taken one of his angels home.
We were unfit to keep her.
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jasonw
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2003-01-30 07:00:00]
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Re: Angels Gone
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 11:35:20 AM AEST
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Jason,AAHH I really feel for you in this sad write!Its never easy loosing someone dear!
Your words so heartfelt I hope you will find peace in your heart! Good touching poem! Christina |
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Re: Angels Gone
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by psyonara on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 05:43:35 AM AEST
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| Very well written. It moved me deeply. Hope you regain some peace in your heart about these emotions... :) |
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