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A Dream
Contributed by
chaos78
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Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 10:03:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I had a dream last night that I held you so tight and you were so beautiful to me that I kissed you all night. But when I woke up you were no where in sight is it a dream to be. Dreaming of you is all I do as I face life without you. With no end to it all as my world start to fall. For I lost your love to a fake friend but I don't want us to end.
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Re: A Dream
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by Jenn2004 on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 06:24:19 PM AEST
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| That was a good poem, it reminded me of the dreams i use to have about someone i wanted so bad. I always hated dreams like that, cause i would wake up and it wouldnt be true. |
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Re: A Dream
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by thexshattered on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 11:03:54 PM AEST
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| Hm... Maybe you could divide this poem instead of posting it as prose? Because there are very evident rhymes here, and if you have a rhythm that's expressed by the division into lines, I'm sure it'll come out beautiful. |
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