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A Car I Call ''Gage''
Contributed by
kidnic
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Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 09:42:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Like a dog out a window,
Ears flapping and tongue gone,
I take it all in at once,
A new day is dawn.
For, I'm a sheltered one,
I hardly get out for air,
So, like a dog,
I just sit there and stare.
Marveling at such beauty,
I pant to keep my breath.
Smelling and sound abound;
I feel so far from death.
So, with my primitive brain,
I wonder how far,
Or how wonderfully free,
I could get in this car.
But we arrive there at last,
A beautiful place of summers past,
And I realize for once,
That living here is eternally a fast,
'Cause I constantly crave these drives of late,
And wish that they would forever last.
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kidnic
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2006-03-13 09:42:35]
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Re: A Car I Call ''Gage''
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by Shmokin on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 01:04:53 PM AEST
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| Nice imagery, innocent pleasure, :-) |
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Re: A Car I Call ''Gage''
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by thexshattered on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 11:02:17 PM AEST
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| The rhythm is a bit choppy, but catchy, as well. I didn't like the first part, but you made up for it in the middle and the end. |
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