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A Stream of Nonsense
Contributed by
KimElmer
on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 12:43:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I passed a man or rather strolled on by,
I said "Hey brother" but he just rolled his eyes.
He said "I ain't your brother" and he didn't see,
That I didn't quite mean it literally.
I guess this was something he didn't understand,
And I kindly explained that I meant it as in "Brotherhood of Man"
Now I know my fashion and speak may be a little outdated,
But are these thoughts really so antiquated?
For it's these little things, runs my theory,
That filters up from communities, into entire countries.
Now you may think that this is a little naive,
But it is all I can do in this climate of war, madness and greed.
I hope that can you forgive me,
If this rhyme and meter aren't sleek,
But I've just woken up after a 16 hour sleep.
And before that I couldn't sleep, not even a peep.
And it's precisely these kinds of things,
That have kept me up all week.
Copyright ©
KimElmer
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2006-03-13 00:43:54]
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Re: A Stream of Nonsense
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by wesmaun on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 12:47:57 AM AEST
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| very good and you really kept your ryhm going well. and i hope you had a good nap peace |
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Re: A Stream of Nonsense
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by anova on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 06:04:34 AM AEST
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| i really liked the first verse, it kinda made me laugh! (don't know if this was intended) well done brother! |
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Re: A Stream of Nonsense
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by Lionel on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 12:40:01 PM AEST
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| I don't think it's nonsense. You make a good point. I forgive you ( the rhime and meter thing). I'm sometimes a trangresser there too. God bless. |
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