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I Hate Everything About You
Contributed by
Cold_Blue_Eyes
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Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:36:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I hate your gorgeous brown eyes,
The eyes that make my heart skip a beat,
Skip a beat everytime with mine they meet.
I hate your buffed up biceps,
The biceps that make me want to crawl into your grasp,
Crawl into your grasp and stay until my very last gasp.
I hate your sparkling smile,
The smile that makes me weak in the knees,
Weak in the knees when directed at me.
I hate everything about you,
What I hate most is that I don't hate you at all,
In fact i love you; but you don't even care enoufh to give me a call.
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2006-03-12 23:36:32]
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Re: I Hate Everything About You
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by wesmaun on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 12:04:43 AM AEST
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| ok im gonna be nice. the ending was kinda forced and corny. and its a bit choppy. but you know its got a great meaning behind it and can really be used to show some feeling. |
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Re: I Hate Everything About You
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 02:20:02 AM AEST
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um, well as a poem it was alright, but you made it seem as though you just like him just for his looks....but again that's just the say the poem makes it look...anyway..
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