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The Only Three Chances
Contributed by
MyNameIsJonas
on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 10:57:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The ring keeps buzzing and no one is there
So I sit and think of how I would fair
Three rings pass and I wait for your answer
Waiting any longer would cause cancer
Alas the first attempt didn't come through
Disregarding that I will try for two
Undoubtedly forgetting the last try
If you don't pick up I would let it fly
That unique ring just keeps continuing;
Wondering to start discontinuing
I cannot give up yet just one more try
Until you pick up and when I say bye
I tire of waiting; it's getting late
I'll try again tomorrow just you wait
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2006-03-12 22:57:10]
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Re: The Only Three Chances
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:13:19 PM AEST
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hmm i think you should give up on that.
anyways an interesting write. |
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Re: The Only Three Chances
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 02:16:02 AM AEST
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Very intresting.
Why put yourself through the misery it just makes thing worse on you not the other person. Trust me I know. Good write |
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