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Soft Melody
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 08:45:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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So deep your song echoes
Inside my soul it sounds
As the soft breeze
Drifts across the ground
A melody so soft
Tender renderings
As the fragile flowers
Blooming in the spring
Harmonies added
By the things you do
As the fluffy clouds
Add beauty to sky of blue
Wonders that is you
In a magical way
Lightens as the Sun
Breaks through a cloudy day
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2006-03-12 20:45:25]
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Re: Soft Melody
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by MyNameIsJonas on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 08:55:26 PM AEST
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Yay, reminded me that spring is coming !!
I like your description of stuff |
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Re: Soft Melody
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by thesinner on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 08:56:44 PM AEST
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| Such tender thoughts. |
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Re: Soft Melody
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by Alison on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 10:35:18 PM AEST
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| wow i think its beautiful! |
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Re: Soft Melody
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:22:22 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful |
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Re: Soft Melody
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 01:40:37 AM AEST
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Very romantic. Beautifully penned.
Thank you for sharing.
Tim
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Re: Soft Melody
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by felicitous on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 04:22:52 AM AEST
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| music can be such a beautiful metaphor. nice. |
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Re: Soft Melody
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 03:02:39 PM AEST
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beautiful words, yes a melody.. a beautiful song here..
raquelLeah |
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Re: Soft Melody
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:11:00 PM AEST
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This was a very well done work. I enjoyed it immensely. Your discriptions were unique and your flow very agreeable to the reader. A very gentle write, and adorably gathered.
Good Job!
- SCM |
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Re: Soft Melody
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by EmptyGirl on
Thursday, 16th March 2006 @ 01:51:00 AM AEST
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| This is a really lovely poem. Very sweet and tender, and that's nice to see for a change. Sometimes a girl just needs a smile :) Thanks |
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