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Unrequitedly Dead
Contributed by
MyNameIsJonas
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Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 08:32:34 PM in AEST
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These cuts and bruises that are on my arms
Cannot compete with the pain I might feel.
The scars may be visible but they're charms,
Compared to the pain that might never heal.
This is the first but it won't be content
Even a taste of this feeling makes me ache
Asking you is starting to make me spent
But I need a response; please don't be fake
All I really want is to make this work
Instead of that I cause thoughts and regret
If it builds up I just might go berserk
Just one thing to say and that you must get
I fear of the truth and what you might say
If the feelings expressed would cause dismay
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2006-03-12 20:32:34]
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Re: Unrequitedly Dead
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:27:35 PM AEST
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Re: Unrequitedly Dead
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 02:24:42 AM AEST
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First thing first Cheerleading isn't that hard j/k
Secondly good poem.
Thirdly. Sometimes you might get a different response if you just ask. I know its hard and you are scared of the outcome but if you already fear the worst then you won't be disappointed and if you don't get the response that you wanted then you know that it wasn't meant to be and there is somebody else out there that is. Good luck |
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